Editing descriptive writing based on ‘A monster within’

Editing is the process of making technical corrections to a piece of writing. Accurate spelling, punctuation and grammar is essential to help your reader understand your writing. Revising is where you look at or consider again a piece of writing in order to correct or improve it. Using a variety of sentence starters is important because it can influence the pace, emphasis or cohesion of a sentence. You can vary your sentence starters by using adjectives, verbs or adverbs.