Writing a response on human nature in Golding's 'Lord of the Flies'

Consider the first version of your work a first draft and not the finished essay. Redrafting your analytical writing is just as important as redrafting your creative writing. A clear and concise essay focuses on the writer’s use of methods. A successful essay offers a comprehensive explanation and exploration of the effects the writer’s methods. Asking yourself ‘why’ at each stage in the writing process helps you to maintain a focus on the writer’s intentions.