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Drafting a piece of descriptive writing on 'Alice's Adventures in Wonderland'

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I can draft a piece of descriptive writing and then go back over it and revise it.

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Drafting is where you write the first version of a piece of writing. Revising is where you look at or consider again a piece of writing in order to correct or improve it. Using a variety of sentence starters is important because it can influence the pace, emphasis or cohesion of a sentence. You can vary your sentence starters by using adjectives, verbs or adverbs.

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