Writing a section of a narrative based on 'The Borrowers'

In this section of the build-up, suspense is built around Arrietty setting off on her first borrowing expedition. The use of precise and ambitious vocabulary, including ‘show and tell’ language supports the building of suspense. Using a range of sentence types, including adverbial complex sentences, supports text flow. An adverbial clause begins with a subordinating conjunction. An adverbial clause is joined with a main clause to form an adverbial complex sentence.