Writing part 2 of the climax of 'The Firework Maker's Daughter'

Direct speech between two characters in a narrative forms a dialogue. Inverted commas are used to demarcate speech and a piece of punctuation separates speech from the reporting clause. Precise and ambitious vocabulary shows and tells the reader what happened and how characters are feeling. Using a range of sentence types improves text flow for the reader. An adverbial complex sentence is a sentence formed of a main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause.