Writing the build-up of 'The Iron Man' (part two)

In part two of the build-up, humanity responds angrily to the Iron Man by trapping and burying him. There is a contrast between how the farmers and Hogarth feel after the Iron Man is buried. The use of precise and ambitious vocabulary supports the building of suspense. ‘Show and tell’ can be used to convey emotions and how these intensify and shift. Using a range of sentence types supports text flow and helps achieve the text’s purpose.