Planning the build-up of 'The BFG' (part two)

The purpose of the build-up is to build up suspense and excitement. Precise and ambitious vocabulary is logged on a plan for future use. Notes should not be written in full sentences and bullet points can be used to make notes clear. Fronted adverbials of time, place and manner indicate when, where and how action takes place. 'Show-not-tell' language shows a character’s feelings by describing their actions, body language and facial expressions.