Writing the build-up of ‘The BFG’ (part two)
Cashar 7 / 12
Muuqaalka casharka
Muuqaalku weli diyaar ma aha.
Bogagga casharka
weli lama diyaarin
Faahfaahinta casharka
Natiijada casharka
I can write the second part of a narrative build-up based on ‘The BFG’.
Muuji qoraalka
The purpose of the build-up is to build tension and suspense.
Saying sentences aloud before they are written helps to check for sense.
Using the full range of sentence types (simple, compound and complex) improves text flow for the reader.
Fronted adverbials of time, place and manner describe the action in the main clause in further detail.
'Show-not-tell' language shows a character’s feelings by describing their actions, body language and facial expressions.
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weli lama diyaarin
Imtixaannada
Imtixaankan weli diyaar ma aha.
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